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Why Tense Isn’t Enough
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Why Tense Isn’t Enough

Unlocking Temporality & Narrative Distance in Fiction

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Monalisa Foster
Jun 15, 2025
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We don’t see a lot of discussion about temporality, sequencing, and temporal shifts in fiction, but it really is a subject that deserves discussion.

In the simplest terms, what I mean is whether or not the story on the page is over or is unfolding in real story time. And I know you’ll be shocked when I tell you that it also depends on narrative schema. T…

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