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Show-don't-tell and the first draft (part 1)
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Show-don't-tell and the first draft (part 1)

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Monalisa Foster
Apr 14, 2024
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Polishing a turd is one thing. Sending out a first-vomit draft is its opposite. Neither is good and this is why “never rewrite” is like nails on my own very personal chalkboard. And no, it’s not the editors job to fix it.

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I keep telling myself I will take snapshots of my scenes in progress and put them here to show you how muc…

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