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Direct internal monologue part 1

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Aug 04, 2024
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Imagine that you’re Lt. Gorman from Aliens and you’re sitting in the APC (armored personnel carrier) and watching your team on the monitors. This is the first in sequence of posts about analyzing errors in your manuscript and discussing why they might have occurred and what kind of errors might result.

Getting back to being poor Lt. Gorman, for purposes …

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